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Tuesday, September 11, 2018

A bundle tied with string




Life can be tied into a bundle
With narration and stored away
Only to be discovered
By someone else one day
If they look with care
They might notice
Wear and tear
But, there
life


Photo: Joanna Kosinska/unsplash
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6 comments:

  1. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSeptember 12, 2018 at 2:22 AM

    I like this depiction of life as memories (letters, photos, journals) tied with string and stored. And congratulations on adding rhyme to the form!

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  2. Carrie Van HornSeptember 15, 2018 at 11:45 AM

    Love the form and the message within it. Lovely writing Vicki!!

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  3. MargaretSeptember 22, 2018 at 7:45 PM

    Lovely. Reminds me a bit of a wonderful movie. The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society. Maybe a bit predictable BUT it has some historic and very real surprises in it. I loved it.

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