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Saturday, April 27, 2019

Haiku



Her panic arrived
Like a sudden summer rain
Drenching decisions


Photo: Josiel Miranda from Pexels.
For the Muse #53
https://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/





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18 comments:

  1. Carrie Van HornApril 27, 2019 at 1:25 PM

    Oh Vicki I love this Haiku! I can relate to this one as well!

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  2. Magaly GuerreroApril 28, 2019 at 10:32 AM

    The shock is so real.

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  3. C. SandlinApril 28, 2019 at 1:57 PM

    Yikes. Vivid and relatable.

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  4. Eddie BluelightsApril 28, 2019 at 3:37 PM

    Love it Vicky.
    A sweet Haiku.
    Cheers
    Eddie

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  5. tonispencerApril 28, 2019 at 4:24 PM

    A wonderful senryu! So full of emotion about the shock of the sudden rain. So much in this short form.

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  6. FireblossomApril 28, 2019 at 4:28 PM

    Yes, emotions can absolutely color our decisions, even take them over. best to carry an umbrella or a best friend who knows how to talk us down!

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  7. rallentandaApril 29, 2019 at 8:15 AM

    This is a beautiful haiku.Well done !

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  8. rob kistnerApril 29, 2019 at 9:34 AM

    Panic is a debilitating situation. I like the way you ecpressed that here Vicki - fine write!k

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  9. Susie ClevengerApril 29, 2019 at 3:46 PM

    Oh, wow! This I have felt before, but never had such a poetic way to express it.

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  10. purplepeninportland.comMay 1, 2019 at 5:03 PM

    Great haiku, Vicki!

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